Cambridge 19 Test 4 Writing Task 1 (Pie chart and bar chart)

The graphic information presents data on the venues and types of dance classes attended by two Australian age groups. The pie chart illustrates the percentage of each location, while the bar chart displays the types of dance classes attended by individuals under 11 and those aged 11 to 16.

According to the pie chart, dance classes are held in four locations: private studios, school halls (after school), community halls & other, and college-based studios. Among these, nearly half of young Australians attend dance classes in private studios. Twenty-four percent take their classes in school halls, followed by 18 percent in community halls & other. Lastly, only 10 percent of dancers attend classes in college-based studios.

According to the bar chart, there are three types of dance classes: ballet, tap, and modern. Interestingly, a reverse trend is observed between the two age groups. Among dancers under 11, the most popular classes are ballet, tap, and modern, with nearly 600 students studying ballet, around 450 taking tap lessons, and approximately 300 participating in modern dance. In contrast, for the 11–16 age group, the order is reversed, with modern dance being the most popular, followed by tap and ballet. More than 500 students practice modern dance, an estimated 430 take tap lessons, while only 300 are learning ballet.

Word count: 213

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