Academic Writing Task 1 Structure + Vocabulary (Synonyms of "increase")

REPORT STRUCTURE:

Paragraph1: Paraphrased topic + Overall/Overview (if there are two or more graphs, you need to explain the main data of each graph in one sentence)

P2: 1st detail mentioned in the overview if you only have one graph (Details of the first graph, if you have two or more graphs)

P3: 2^nd detail from the overview if you only have one graph (Details of the second graph if you have two or more graphs

P4: Strange information like a different trend or an abnormal data seen in the graph. (This can be rare)

Sample essay:

The graph presents the total number of British male and female students who are studying fulltime and part-time. It shows that the study was conducted once every ten years from 1970/71 to 1990/91. As can be seen, part-time education is more preferred by both genders in all periods. Also, in every period, there is an increase in students in both education category but the huge jump was recorded during the first decade of the study for female student full-timers.

In 1970/71, there were around a million male students who study irregularly. It was ten times more than those who study regularly. However, a fluctuation for part-timers was seen in the next twenty years. A different trend, a steady rise, was shown for fulltime British male learners and by the end of the period, the number of students that study the whole time had doubled as compared with the data in 1970/71.

Looking at the information for female learners, as with men, more women chose to study non fulltime during each term. A significant leap can be noted from the middle of the graph to the end of the interval reaching its peak to about 1.1 million college undergrads. Another important highlight is the growth in the number of regular students during the first decade which eventually continued to escalate until it leveled off with the rate of male full-timers in 1990/91.

WORD COUNT: 234

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