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Cambridge 13 Academic Writing test 4 Task 2





Sample essay:
The study of History has been recently a subject of debate by most people. Some say that it must be taught in schools while others believe that other subject matters, especially Science and Technology, are more important. This essay will explain a few reasons why both subjects are necessary and why weighing the relevance of either is not considerable.

The goal of most fields now is to make lives easier and better. This is the number one explanation as to why most people say that studying subject matters related to Science and Technology is more fruitful. Politicians, media personalities, and many others have imprinted in the minds of individuals the effect and pleasures of having modern lives. Also, work-related opportunities connected to these fields have enticed many people to choose this career path. As a result, students applying in these fields have been increasing to all new heights. Although true, it does not necessarily conclude that learning History should not be prioritized.

History is still a field that needs more attention. Not many people see the value of it. People view history as studying events, dates, and entities that have long been dead. Moreover, it can be uninteresting at some point. However, it is essential to remember that the past is directly related to the present and to the future. It is fundamental to learn these events that shaped what is now. When it comes to career opportunities, being a history major has a lot of benefits. It is unknown to many, but skills learned by graduates of this field are the most sought after abilities of many recruiters.

Overall, studies that help many understand the causes of events, like History, can give us light as to what actions need to be done in order to change or even avoid the effects. This is where the study of Science and Technology comes in. These fields work hand in hand for the betterment of society.

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