Skip to main content

Cambridge 12: Academic IELTS Test 5 Writing task 2 sample essay (Information Technology)


Sample essay:

One of the basic human rights that people exercise freely nowadays is the right to information. The advent of information technology paved the way for us to make information, whether from scientific research, business and academic world, more accessible. Although many people agree that this has good benefits, some insist that there should be a limit to what information can be shared to the public. This essay will focus on the pros and cons of these two ideas.

Technological advancements have made it possible for us to search for and gain information with much ease and convenience. In fact, most people rely on and utilize the internet more than ever. We can study just about anything we can think of when you find the right resources on the web. There has been an upsurge of distance learning courses offered by different institutions. This kind of learning has attracted not only students but also professionals who unfortunately, do not have the luxury of time to go to a proper school due to their work schedule. In addition, some courses are also offered for free. This can be of benefit to those who are willing to study but are financially constrained.

Of course, all things good can come with a price. One downfall that should be considered is the fact that people can literally share and give knowledge to anyone without limits. To explain briefly, one can learn how to “make explosives” just by watching tutorial videos that are readily available on the internet. Once this kind of information reaches someone with a motive to do harm and terror to others, we cannot blame the person who uploaded and shared what he knows on the internet since everyone has the right to give and receive information in any means they want. Another disadvantage is that learning through distance courses can not necessarily qualify an individual. There are instances that learners should acquire more training and practices to deserve a certification.


In summary, as with other human rights, there should be limits in what information we share publicly. 

Word count: 345
Labels:

Comments

  1. UnknownApril 20, 2020 at 12:29 PM

    if write this way, what will be the desire score?

    ReplyDelete
  2. wonderfulwordofjazzApril 20, 2020 at 4:24 PM

    this is a band 7 type of essay

    ReplyDelete
  3. UnknownMay 4, 2021 at 7:54 AM

    1 mistake here="Practices to deserve"- here the verb 'practices' is used with gerund form,It should be 'practices deserving'.

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Cambridge 11 Test 3 Writing Task 1

Sample: The data from the line graph illustrates the carbon dioxide emissions of an average individual per metric tonnes in four European countries every decade from 1967-2007.A closer look at the data highlights the fact that among the 4 nations, the UK has the highest rate in carbon dioxide emissions per person in 40 years. In 1967, there was approximately 11 metric tonnes of carbon dioxide released by an average Englishman which was about ten times higher than the emissions made by an individual from Portugal. However, it can be seen that as time went by, the carbon dioxide emitted by Englishmen decreased gradually to over 8 metric tonnes in 2007. On the other hand, a different trend can be noted in the countries Italy and Portugal where the emissions slowly rose from an initial rate of approximately 4 and 1 metric ton to about 7 and 6 metric tonnes in 4 decades. In Sweden, emissions increased to its record highest in 1977 w...
1 comment
Read more

Cambridge 15: Academic IELTS Writing Test 4: Task 1 (Pie Chart and Table)

The pie chart illustrates the percentage of what Anthropology graduates from one university did after their graduation. The table reveals the earned income they make after 5 years’ work according to three kinds of employment. Overall, in the first graph, most of the graduates worked fulltime after finishing university while the table shows that those who rendered work for 5 years earn a different range in payment in various work sectors.   According to the pie chart, among the six destinations provided, a little over half of the alumni went straight on to working fulltime. Part-time workers garnered the second place with 15%. Surprisingly, the rate of unemployed graduates came in third with 12%. Two sections, full-time postgrad study, and unknown, have the same 8% result while only 5% of the responders said that they work part-time while studying postgrad.   As for salaries, ten and 35 percent of private employees earn from 25 thousand to almost 75 thousand dollars. In con...
8 comments
Read more

Cambridge 11 Test 4 Writing Task 1

Sample: The given data presents the changes in the number of guests and their levels of satisfaction during the pre- and post-renovation period of Ashdown Museum. An overview of the table shows the notable rise in the overall number of visitors who went to the museum after the year of its renovation. While the two pie charts reveal the decline of guests’ dissatisfaction and the surge of their satisfaction. According to the graphs, there was a higher number of people who seem to be unhappy with their trip to the museum during the year before Ashdown museum’s refurbishment. However, these figures changed significantly after the revamping of the building. The dissatisfaction percentage went down to an average of 50 percent. In contrast, guests’ fulfillment climbed up from 30% to 40% (satisfied) and 15% to 35% (very satisfied). Although the results seem to give a positive output both in total guest number and meeting the guests’ ex...
3 comments
Read more